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Red Temptations, The beginning

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She lay there, cold, lifeless, her body sprawled in different directions like a ragdoll dropped by a small child. His hands, gently cradled her head, a low growl coming from his throat. "Leilah..." he growled, eyes darting warily. "I swear I will kill you for this! For killing Lunaria!" He hissed, his eyes darkening to a pale coal. He lowered his head to the unmoving girl's neck, restraining another growl. He gently set his mouth on her neck, his sharp teeth piercing the soft skin. Her body let out a small yelp before going limp. The blood poured, darkening the concrete to a dull crimson. He drank it, faster, hungrier. He had to save her. He growled, bringing his mouth back. "It's all I can do...she'll be in extreme pain....but she'll be alive." The frail girl wriggled in his arms, wincing a bit before her eyes opened slightly, revealing a pinkish tint to them. She coughed, blood pouring, flooding her mouth, her eyes widened. The males name was Cethin. Lunaria remembered him.
I dont...like it too much..its jsut the first paragraph, comment, critique, let me know if I should psot the rest.

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